Review Detail of Freylingo in wfgsh

Writing this as of Chapter 19 being published. The beginning of the story isn't going to be grand, it's the main character learning and mastering some spells. After the a few more chapters is where things start to get spicy. Blood, competition, love, criminals, power. Everything you could hope in a book starts a little later. I just wanted to establish the main character and make him be able to stand on the same stage as the power houses.