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2022-06-27 15:16

This is my lowest rating for a book I deemed as nice, not because it's bad just that it needs an editor, at times I thought the setting was in China, then USA, then I didn't know anymore. All in all it was a good book, concept wise and the curve ball that author-san threw with Eddie and not puesdo Ben was Sophia's long list brother was nice, I mean I felt that he might not have been her brother but I didn't suspect that it'll be Eddie. Anyway it's a feel-good read, kudos to you author-san.

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Thanks for giving this novel a try☺️☺️this is one of my earlier published books that I didn't bother to edit. Rest assured all my current books are already edited prior I published them as I exert time and effort to proofread them 🤞🤞🤞

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