Honestly it was pretty good, came from a daily recommendation and ended up finished this within three days! The plot kept throwing new surprises at you while having "filler" arcs on the side to help build story and keep you engaged. At some point most of the characters get less 'screen time' and it made me kind of sad b/c they had some potential for side stories. Even the ending had potential for epilogue, it ended kind of abruptly. There were definitely parts that didn't make sense in the story but it didn't really affect the overall ending. One thing is the names get mixed up sometimes, and I hope the author can see the spots in paragraph comment and fix it if possible. Bc it does interrupt her story when it makes the readers confused.
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Thanks for the generous and good review my love😘😘🙏💞
I wanted to edit it but recently WN restricted the editing of those published chapters, unlike before it can be done easily
I figured there may have been some restriction since it was already published 😔 it's too bad WN doesn't make it easier for the authors when you're the ones bringing in the readers! It was a really good read though, I was surprised I kept reading it since sometimes I stop once it's not free anymore. You made it an affordable and an enjoyable read ! 💕 Thanks for your hard work and sharing your fun story ! Can't wait to check out your other books ~
