Review Detail of KingBiBiK in Immortal God Master and the Reincarnated Disciple

I wanted to write a fun, cultivation world novel while using the usual cliches and tropes of the genre in my own way. This is not your typical cultivation novel, and I hope you enjoy this. This novel is based on the fun adventures of a reborn disciple from Earth and Immortal Master who lacks social skills. Planning to update 1/day. I want to write slightly long chapters and hence it's hard for multiple releases. I am thinking of breaking down long chapters to 2 for the first week. I know I am not great at writing, and I forget even the basic grammar rules. But I really want to tell stories. So if you find errors or have suggestions, please feel free to comment. This is my entry for WPC #108. I do realize the works that I am a horrible editor of my own work. So, if I end up missing anything, I will try to go back and edit those past chapters after a certain number of chapters get released. Looking forward to building this novel with you all and learning from it. Still why I give this a 5* rating? Because I am shameless and this is my own novel xd.