Review Detail of amaturewriter in Very Pure and Ambiguous

ctual rating 4 stars..3 stars I gave cause I didnt like the cliche ****..ie: MC liked someone but didnt confess and when he died the day his love was getting married he went back in time...a garbage cliche idea...but then I read on cause I was bored -its interesting but there is false advertising, MC says he hides abilities but so far he dosnt, dude flat out shoes his genius or at some of his abilities [ex: CHP 12]......its interesting but the romance seems shallow, MC seems to only the chick cause she looks good and the chick only seems to like MC cause he looks good and is smart....so yah..shallow romance....would be nice if its built and the lovers love each other more than anything [say chick is a heiress but she leaves it to be with MC..get what I mean?...i suggest want some fluff.....tierd of the usual **** where MC has to be OP [need to have power, money, etc ]to get the chick....so yah build the romance. Also kudos to author, dudes just dropping **** left and right, updating superfast...nice....anyway GL