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Trap_Mocha
Trap_MochaLv24yr
2020-07-28 15:45

Does the main character ever change from how she is at the beginning? Is there really good character development? Because I'm only up to chapter 11 and I'm already considering dropping this (I actually did drop it before, but I'm back again) because of the main character's personality... She's just wayy too overconfident and immature. I feel like if she continues acting this way it will only cause drama and negatively impact everything and everyone around her. However, the novel overall is really good and I hear a lot of good things about it, so I want to give it another shot. But at the same time, I'm not sure I wanna get into this novel if the character will remain the same. So I'm creating this review in hopes someone will help me.

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Honestly I believe she does very soon from chpt 11 onwards it also answers some questions

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