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TheBardOfIves
TheBardOfIvesAuthor4yr
2020-03-30 20:05

The writer here! Like always I am trying to boost my morale on my own. I know that you may think of me as just any other shameless writer who is giving himself five stars. Well, then I am! :) I see to end the story with around twenty chapters without rushing it or spoiling th pace of the story and giving it a proper ending. So please support me by power stones and more reviews. I like to talk with others who are interested in the kind of stories I am. Anyways hope you enjoy!

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Dallas_Kramer
Dallas_KramerLv15

I'm looking forward to reading your book. I am going to wait until more chapters build up before starting though. Also, you misspelled chaotic and wrong in the synopsis.

TheBardOfIves
TheBardOfIvesAuthor

Thanks for the pointing out the 'chaotic' synopsis (pun intended) and I will be trying to update as frequently as possible so that I can reach about fifteen chapters soon, but it might take one or two days for that number because otherwise the length of the chapters will be shorter. So anyways chapters will build up soon.

Dallas_Kramer:I'm looking forward to reading your book. I am going to wait until more chapters build up before starting though. Also, you misspelled chaotic and wrong in the synopsis.
TheBardOfIves
TheBardOfIvesAuthor

And also give at least a couple of chapters a try and tell me if I have lacked somewhere as a writer :)

Dallas_Kramer:I'm looking forward to reading your book. I am going to wait until more chapters build up before starting though. Also, you misspelled chaotic and wrong in the synopsis.
MilordInk
MilordInkLv13

Well. I'm intrigued. Also a bit peeved that the exp sect is controlling your review section, so let me change that.

SoberanoSinNombre
SoberanoSinNombreLv5

the cataclysm was in 2012 and Zaiden is 17 years old, that is, he was born in 2003. but you say he was born after the cataclysm? wouldn't he be 9 or 10 years old then?

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MilordInk
MilordInkLv13

So. Back again with a review- a more serious one. Y'all better give me some face and try the novel anyways after reading the review, since this one could become a gem. Writing Quality: 4.0 For now at least. There's only five chapters out at the time of my review, but from what I can see, the author has a lot of room to improve. But his writing as of right now, isn't unbearable, or horrible. I can easily look past his run-on sentences to see the story he's developing. He's also improving fast, and takes advice well so I know his writing style will definitely grow. (Bard, you have a 4 right now because I see a lot of potential) Stability of Updates: A compulsory 4.0 since I don't know his schedule- I'm not going to tank him if he just started writing his novel. I have feeling though, he'll be consistently putting out a few chapters every week. Story Development: 4.3, since there's definitely a story, though the future is vague. Can't say too much about the story itself(no spoilers)- so why don't you discover it yourself? Character Design: 4.0 since the MC is a bit too childish for my tastes, not really acting his age. Though, that is how the author intended him, the MC isn't too bad that I'll drop a good novel because of him. Other characters are vague at this point, so I'm still in wait-and-see mode for them. World Background: 4.0, decent enough. The author will probably expand on it later, but it's not bad either. Not much to say, so no comment. Phew. That's it. Really, that is. I'm breaking my ten chapters then review rule, but I had to do one anyways. It has a lot of room to grow, but the author has potential- and that is something that we readers should support. The birth of a good novel, isn't that what every reader wants? Try it. -Milord

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