Review Detail of Weirdo in luffy back in time (completed)

Havent read this but tbf, the best way to strengthen the body is haki which is will based meaning it shouldnt matter. Unless he gets a mega big nerf.

Mega big Nerf.. And no, haki is augment not the best way to strengthen body... Best way to strengthen body is to train hard and anime style which mean something crazy... Haki actually need a strong body to use, kind of like touki who only activate is you have reach the standard.. And his Nerf is a lot.. From how he could actually go back full power in few more day, he can't wait even when he already wait for thousand year(And that whole thousand year of maturity suddenly gone with the wind.. Feel like author forced him to become stupid even when he's smart enough to create his own empire.. Too much forced plot) .. And he have thousand year of time to have more comrade and friend yet he still stuck at his ****-ager time, another forced Nerf.. And third is how his personality all over the place... Just read the first chapter, you would see why I said this all..

Now that I had write it, I suddenly feel like this fanfic is not that good... Author clearly just write down his thousand year of life as fart, something like those isekai genre where his last life is worthless sh1t...

Yea, its stupid how Ace can even touch him. When Luffy fought against the Skypeia Mantra users he couldn't even land a hit without using attacks that are pretty much supersonic. So yea, its kinda dumb. Also its clear his observation Haki and Conquerors Haki is super nerfed. Like he calmed the seas with it after destroying the moon. The concept is good but the delivery is judt horrible.

Yeah... And telling you all of the previous plot hole, I think this fanfic is one full of hole... Too much forced plot.. I rather author let Luffy found something like temporal book of NieLi and accidentally go back in time as kid...

Yea, like how he needed 1000 years to find a fruit? He could literally go around the world in a week and use Observation Haki.

See what I'm saying? Massive plot hole... But still, it's a good read for me if you ignored any plot hole.. Just treat it as a bad, cold Nazi joke... Encourage writer more so they may wrote more and improve...

Ahh, I prefer to say that "Author have this little idea, a good one maybe but definitely not the brightest.. But still, he tried. That's why I would recommend you to read it for first chapter. Maybe you like the stupidity in it? Maybe you don't?.."

Ty for showing me, that I shouldn't waste time here with this :D.