Review Detail of Kaugmahan in Roma vena

Hi AUTHOR here! As you can see, the novel is still in its infancy. I would very much appreciate suggestions and any points that I should improve here in the Review. Any review is welcome but if you give me a good review, I will worship you. Lol. Btw, English is not my first language but I'm doing my best to make this understandable to my readers. THANKS A LOT!!!