honestly it sucks how much you literally force your MC to be average, in a world where the protagonist gains strength from seeing breasts, this is literally you trying to force logic in a world that has no logic at all, and the last straw is Asia's death in ch 3, honestly, if I keep reading it will only be in the force of hate, there's no reason for you to kill Asia as much as for you to let Kiba live, Asia just wanted a friend, whatever she suffered, and come you author to make such a death for her, immeasurable disappointment.

the 1st chapter was very good but everything was ruined in the 3rd chapter. - The MC indirectly helps the bad guys because of their devil bias and causes Asia's death. - Much drama and misunderstandings - You can see the hatred directed at Rias and her nobility which is irrational because despite their personality problems they are not bad people. - Thousands of years of training and results in a mcdevil and ignorant, ignorance that caused the disaster in chapter 3 ... Just because he sensed the existence of demons he automatically thought they were bad. After those thousands of years of being on the throne of heroes, the MC should already know that the church and gods can be worse than demons.

Sorry could not get past 3 chapter. I hate pointless drama. Mc misurderstand devils of DxD from the start. To me all of this is just filler. Well some people clearly like it so give it a try.

the only dxd fanfic that i will rate 5 star after reading only 1 chapter.

Pointless drama is so boring and chapter three is stupid. I already know how the rest of the story goes, he finds out momo is devil and then he tries to ‘free’ her from sona. which will cause another pointless scandal. how can somebody so old be so dumb? I understand sensing demonic energy and getting tools in case they do attack but why did he ignore that CLEARLY unstable priest? I understand having a bias but how did he not suspect anything was wrong when he was casually talking about mudering humans because they work with devils? And the kiba fight was stupid too, you would think someone who is 6000 years old would know about interrogation or fishing for information in battle. But no, instead he brutally beats him and dosent say a single word even when hes on his knees defeated. Asia’s death was pointless and so was the rias bashing. I cant wait till this story gets inevitably dropped because it is horrid.

within 5 chapters, it's easy enough to delete this. just another Rias bashing. be well. **********************************************************

His abilities had potential in the beginning, but the author decided to incorporate random characters from different series, fail to resolve issues, make his MC do random things, etc. He is supposed to be amongst the Throne of Heros for 6000 years but doesn't act like it. It's basically what the author thought was cool but is cringy and weak.

stop reading it until chapter 4 i lost my interest that's all .

What can I say, Story started good. But to make up for plots author making changes which is not that great. Author Antagonizing devil too much and although MC Say's he don't wants a pervert to be around he steel bears with it. At first I thought its going to be easy going story but some time gets serious. And there are Lots hateble Character you can kill if you wan to. Again I read only 8 chapters so I don't know what author has planed for future plot,but your writing makes me feel like I can't go on with the story.Anyway May be going to read when have time in the future if author don't drop this .

The background of the MC and his actions are completely contradictory. Apparently he spent 6,000 years being trained by heroes yet, he still acts like a toddler. Constantly making biased and rash decisions without properly thinking things through, almost every action he takes is the worst and causes problems for everyone. Some might enjoy this story but the foolishness of the MC and the amount of drama is a complete turn-off for me as a reader.