Review Detail of mrmrcia in Under Hiatus

I'm really a sucker for reincarnation MCs who actively fights for their future. If Cider gets to a position higher than her scum of a father, she better enact revenge by ignoring him instead of putting an effort and feeding his ego. I'm voting for Darrell to be the ML! Frick that Hayden, he should eat dirt! Also, Luke is probably a psycho, I get that feeling from him. Bern should man up and help Cider whenever she's being abused by their father. I'm quite disappointed at him right now. You're writing style is marvellous! There are also very meager grammar mistakes which is a pleasure to discern! The passages are utterly descriptive that the readers can almost see what's in your imagination. I'll be cheering you on! p.s. This somehow reminds me of Villainess Reverses the Hourglass