Review Detail of The_Gaji in Under Hiatus

The characters were presented in a way that you can’t help but want to know more. And yet it feels like you know enough to fall in love with them. From Cider, the Queen, and Darrel. I couldn’t help but fall for these characters that hold their own unique charm. Dialogue was great and never did I ever feel like it was mechanical or unrealistic, all the dialogue felt organic and charming. The only thing I could say is that I feel like the world hasn’t really been shown or explored. Then again it’s very early into the story. And this could easily be because the story hasn’t gone far enough yet. Altogether an enjoyable read that I eagerly await to follow. Keep up the great work Mellize 😃👍