Review Detail of ludo2776 in Under Hiatus

Hard to juge with stars with so few chapters released, the story is new. I hope this story will continue. It's rare to read a real narration in original books and the narration is great. This is not a first draft posting to post something but a well reasoned work of a legit person knowing how to write. We can see a lot of work and efforts were made in the writing, probably not mere hours from the idea to the publication. I hope you will have the courage to go on like this. I really want to know where it will go.