Review Detail of Her_Shadow in Under Hiatus

Item: Under Hiatus
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

Her_ShadowLv44yrHer_Shadow

I like the story concept and the flow of the writing! The only thing I want is maybe a little bit more alacrity between sequences, and I'd also like clearer hints where the story is going... Overall, very nice read : )

Under Hiatus

Mellize

Liked by 1 people

Replies1

MellizeAuthorMellize

Oh, you mean the pacing of moving from one focus to another? If that's the case, I'll practice to improve and revise the chapters later on. And thanks a lot for the review.

4yr