Review Detail of IPreferLonerMc in Solo Hunt
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The story seems good and the only thing that needs fixing is the grammar as some sentences are weird and ruin the immersion. The MC also seems questionable at times, but I’m hoping he’ll get better as the author continues the story. I’m also biased though as the story reminds me of “Everybody Else Is A Returnee”. Can’t wait for more!
Solo Hunt
Jhonlerex69
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Hontou Arigatou~ I really do appreciate your kind review! The reason my grammar and sentence is a bit weird is that when I write a new chapter, I don't have the time to revise the each sentences since I have a time limit on my work. If I do have more time, I'll do everything I can to make the story's grammar more understandable and deep.
If you haven't already edited the chapters, just before you publish you can run a quick check through grammarly and for me it's only an extra minute
Jhonlerex69:Hontou Arigatou~ I really do appreciate your kind review! The reason my grammar and sentence is a bit weird is that when I write a new chapter, I don't have the time to revise the each sentences since I have a time limit on my work. If I do have more time, I'll do everything I can to make the story's grammar more understandable and deep.