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VYNOESEYE
VYNOESEYELv32yrVYNOESEYE

The mc is weird but not the killing the bird part its different in the first chapter he more look like yandere in Different way and how he act its gave me a creepy Dude vibe how he think about his crush how he want her using money idk this how you want your mc is, and he want the princess too idk man ill put mc in the pedo category even he is 16 mc give me a Rapist vibes And the guy mello is annoying

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The First Mage

JustNanaseKun

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JustNanaseKun
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I actually plan on making four books as a series including this one but guess I won't be doing it for many reasons one is that my writing is kinda bad which I do accept.

VYNOESEYE
VYNOESEYELv3VYNOESEYE

Yep he is rapist