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2020-05-31 04:12

What this novel needs is an editor. I like this type of novels and its frustrating to read a novel with broken words. The story has no problems so far till chapter 25

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Lets do it a screen junkie way. Welcome to world of martial arts where everyone, like everyone is jealous of mc of his gains but they will do nothing to get it..like seriously if this was some other novels, he would already been killed several times over. After reading world's best martial artist, you will started this sort of genre but then you will read this ****, which is like cheap RIP off of it. Think again, same friend, a little sister, a poor family, a system which works credit system, a university exam but ths also tried to make it original by adding weird sort of humor which you will rarely get, additional cliche added so bad that you could puke. But our hero is a kind hearted guy who keep selling things for free for no reason. Like, isn't his family poor, so he should probably try to earn more but you will literally find a ch where the fat freind of his giving him money like 1 sixth of it and he still dont wana take it. Our hero is smart too, like he let's others decide what will be the price of the thing only available to him. Ok..this wasn't as good as others..anyway..the story is slow actually. Like in some 50 ch..he has done these, a fight after a month or so, some fights, giving everyone medicine bag for almost free, a fight and an another fight three months later..finished...no proper improvement in the story Ok...in last I would suggest you go read, world's best martial artist...its like upper version of this Novel, ch should be about 400 something...you will probably love it...just no racism...he haven't done that..but it's in modern world China so who knows...reputation isn't the best...we will have to see for...now just read that...

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