Review Detail of Daoist614277 in Our world, will it be connected(Hiatus/editing)

I will update this story in June, I'm planning to connect my first ever book that I had wrote in wattpad to this story (otome game: you're my love💕I will not fall in love you again), they both have different plots and different main character, just somehow connected, it is ok to read this book only. It won't really play a big role just a minor one.

while reading the book I wanted to skin mary alive why did you have to make so tragic I so badly want to teleport to them and slap the father and son pair and skin the 2 servants alive but it's really Good the first 17 chaptera are just too tragic