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amaturewriter
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3-stars for mass release and legible grammar and structure and for having a SOMEWHAT decent plot... entire thing is just similar to other DXD FF....MC SI as issei into DXD universe and well is in rias perrage, loves her and then some**** happens....would've been nice if this was something different, like IDK MC not liking rias and hating her for slaving him, or something more OG.......MC is retard, perverted and not very smart, dude didnt even keep his power secret, would've been nice if he kept his scared gear secret but nope...MC dosnt think **** through its not new is what I am trying to say.....its boring.....only thing that could make it somewhat unique is the fact that the MC is a champion but even then its still cliche.

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Let's say, he hates her. Then what? He is simply limiting his options. Using the Gremory family to further his goals would be a much better choice. Also an easy choice. If he leaves, he will be marked as stray. It will be much easier to enter and control world politics using Gremory.

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amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

here what I would've suggested...MC reveals he knows about rise manipulating him, then uses that to create a contract with her, she helps him in turn MC helps her, or some****. Bashes rias, or some****..[its not like I hate rias its just that she is a ****ty character, almost every character in dxd is ****, there pain is quite literally some basic ****...only a select few like akeno, koneko, kuroka, etc have truly suffered...also MC could've ****ed with rais saying how she manipulated her peerage into joining her, more interesting, BUT nope, MC had to be a retared pervert....its easy to think of something BUT nope, author had to do some cliche ****, un imaginative is what I am sayinh

Sect_Master_69:Let's say, he hates her. Then what? He is simply limiting his options. Using the Gremory family to further his goals would be a much better choice. Also an easy choice. If he leaves, he will be marked as stray. It will be much easier to enter and control world politics using Gremory.