Review Detail of Kreo08 in Game of thrones: Three Wishes

Terrible Everything in this thing makes me want to forget it, let's start with the grammar. The person writing this is probably not very used to english, but the real problem comes from a lack of punctuation, insertion of capital letters and confused lines. Backgroud Everything is messed up here and if you have an avarage iq you will understand, for first thing there is the trope of the mc becoming incredibly rich in tge early years of his life, let's gloss over the total lack of reaction from the people in general. What he does for gaining money is purifying water to sell... In middle ages where everyone drank water directly from the river no one would spend their money for water. Then Tywin Lannister, after being named some times, he totally vanish, could you imagine him as a total background character? Last problem (for what I read) for the world background is the total lack of information the writer has about the story he is doing a fanfic about (he thinks that Robert Baratheon was pratically already old when the mc and cercei are 10 or 13 I think, when in GoT they are about as old as him). With only this I strongly advise you against reading such a story (this is my first negative review, this is the first story written so bad that pushed me to write such things)