First off, this book is amazing. It’s not that far into it so far, but it already has tons of potential for the story. It’s a great book. Overall, I’d call this the second best Ben Ten novel I’ve ever read, just barely behind Dial.
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LIKEI only said yours was slightly behind Dial because Dial just has more chapters. Yours defiantly could get better than it later on. In my opinion, you’ve had it have everything good that could happen. Can’t wait for more chapters, I have a feeling it’s going to be great!
hacksingh34:Thanks, I checked out the novel and it was great. That's the type of Ben 10 fanfic I've been looking for, definitely using it for inspiration
hacksingh34:Thanks, I checked out the novel and it was great. That's the type of Ben 10 fanfic I've been looking for, definitely using it for inspiration
I was asking yours after all isn't Dial with She-hulk(though I still hoping it goes harem even if it is a small one as I also like that one russian magic user girl)
hacksingh34:For dial I don't know, for mine it's Black Widow
Lord_Snow:Does he use the watch to transform? Or it become his own power?