Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in Prime Vampire

A wonderfully crafted world. Grammar could use some work. Some linking verbs missing, capitalization lacking consistency, among other things. Prose also suffers from the grammar problem, but other than that, would flow well once the grammar improves. Dialogue is natural and as I've said, the world leaves little to the imagination. Would recommend for fans of the genre. Keep on writing 👍