Review Detail of Jasmine_Suckers in A Deal with a Demon (sample)

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Jasmine_SuckersLv14yrJasmine_Suckers

This is an OK story. But why is the first chapter called "The Night We Met"? When it sounds like the two girls already know each other? I mean come on. And then OlexiO leaves the chapter ending with someone sitting in the chair. I'm sorry but I am pretty confused with this story.

A Deal with a Demon (sample)

Lexi1oo

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Lexi1ooAuthorLexi1oo

Hi! Thank-you for your review and you're right, the story does start out a little confusing. But if you stay tuned for more chapters, maybe the story won't be so confusing anymore. My goal is to release a chapter every day or every other day. So please wait until tomorrow for more. -L

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