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2021-04-04 14:08

In The Middle of Reading at Chapter 5 I liked how the author made Mc death really shamelessly embarrassing ~Main Character (Frozen Milk) -The Mc personality is not Cleary described yet but we see him as a sadistic person as he ( an author himself) loves reading hate comments about his own shitty novels. - I don't know The Mc Real name .. The Narrator just calls Him FrozenMilk and I think that's his Pen name when writing Novels... His appearance also wasn't described even thought he already transmigrated his name was still unknown.. in the first world he himself said he became a cannon fodder ... BUt!!!! that he! is still called frozen milk!! The author didnt reveal his real name in the world neither his role as a cannon fodder in the first world...!! The author also at first just calls the villain.. of the story .. THE VILLAIN.. yes thats his name ... im sorry the story is great but its really lacking

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MatchaMilk
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Ah thanks for the review but😭 isnt it a bit too early for a review? I get the thing with the names but this will all eventually be revealed later on in the story😭 This is a special type of comedy so normal logic cant be applied, thats why frozen milk name will stay frozen milk and he wont have a real name, and for all the other characters, the names will be revealed later on but dont expect real names either bc well thats one of the comedy factors in this book You might find it funny, some really do, or you won't, it depends if you like this type of comedy or not but the literal point about this book is pure comedy, bs and plotholes so if you already question these things Im not really sure if this is your kind of book...or you will get or like the comedy😅 But still thanks for giving this a read!

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