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Kamatis
KamatisLv34yr
2020-03-28 06:26

LOL! It's so hilarious!! I actually congratulate you for making me laugh while reading a novel! My family members are now thinking that I have a screw loose. Well, joking aside, I can't really judge your grammar since my grammar sucks too. I don't really have any advise except using Grammarly, LOL! Well, It's true that It's funny as hell but there's more into it that makes it funny. The character building was great! And the world background where everyone was turned on, is definitely great! You portrayed it well! I kind of remember Hensuki with a mix of Konosuba in your story. Well, you can just search those two things in the google. They're japanese light novels, by the way. Lastly, I don't know if you're going to make a sequel or another story but always keep the good work!

Shameless Transmigration: I turned everyone on!

MatchaMilk
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102 Chs

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MatchaMilk
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Thanks, I'll check out hensuki, looks good tbh

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Blank_thought
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I must say that I so didn't feel like reading this novel cuz of the cover, but HOLY CRAP! I WILL NEVER JUDGE A BOOK BY IT'S COVER AGAIN! I mean seriously that was H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S, I kept reading and laughing till I've found my self in chapter 12!! I totally love it! How can someone write something like this!!? what's your secret haha, your a genius! When I'll finish a contest, all my power stones will be yours <3

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NotUse
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First of all, I'm glad that I'm your tenth review unless someone posts a review before I even finish typing this review😒 Anyways, let's start with the writing quality. I love the writing style of your novel. It's genuine and comedic to the point I lost count of how many times I laughed. The chapter titles are also funny from chapter two and onwards. As for the stability of updates, I'm just gonna assume that you update frequently hahaha😂 Well, if you do, I can assure the readers that they won't get left behind. For the world background and character development, they're unique and well made. Honestly, I have nothing to complain out. Overall, this story made me laugh. Every chapter, has a comedic factor, therefore I really recommend this novel to all readers who love comedies, romance and stuff like that. Five over five!!! Keep up the good work and good luck!!!

4yr
Breno_Ranyere
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This is a ton of fun. It's a story about an author who gets isekeied to his own book and now has to pay for all the nonsense he wrote by dealing with it himself. The greatest star of this novel is the narrator. The writing just makes reading this an incredibly enjoyable experience. This is a novel that just embraces its own silliness in all its glory and with pride. Recommend reading the first few chapters to get a feel of the book and see if it's your thing.

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SBLover19
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Dear Author😘 I'm happy to know to be the first reader to vote for this story. It's a wonderful story and I couldn't help but vote it, just want to thank you for sharing it to us and I hope you write more on the future 😊😊😊 For the readers I recommend for you to read this story because it's entertaining and cool ( I won't do any spoiler alerts😚) What I can just say is that it's amazing.

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Alienated9
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OMG! What inspiration brought about this? 😂 I've had this in my library for a while. Started it and I can't stop laughing. The MC is one hilarious person.

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Yuyu_Luck
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I think this is a really interesting story because it is very different from most reincarnation stories I’ve read. I really like the idea of the scum author being stuck in a world he created just to torture his readers. The concept was just so different. The characters and plot is just so interesting.

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phantom6_sensei
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A little confusing at first but once you get the hang of it it's pure comedy. Nice fourth wall breaking. Frozen milk lmao. But try to simplify things a little. Awesome read

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