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2020-03-28 06:26

LOL! It's so hilarious!! I actually congratulate you for making me laugh while reading a novel! My family members are now thinking that I have a screw loose. Well, joking aside, I can't really judge your grammar since my grammar sucks too. I don't really have any advise except using Grammarly, LOL! Well, It's true that It's funny as hell but there's more into it that makes it funny. The character building was great! And the world background where everyone was turned on, is definitely great! You portrayed it well! I kind of remember Hensuki with a mix of Konosuba in your story. Well, you can just search those two things in the google. They're japanese light novels, by the way. Lastly, I don't know if you're going to make a sequel or another story but always keep the good work!

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Thanks, I'll check out hensuki, looks good tbh

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