Review Detail of 8Eight in Master of the Apocalypse

Story so far seem somewhat generic, but there is a few unique takes here and there. English is good, updates are a bit slow, but writing is difficult so can't complain much. The main character is fairly fleshed out Personally I like a bit more detail in my story eg. Base descriptions, what's in the crates he stole etc. The world background is very Interesting, but I don't feel like it's explored that much so far. But keep at it bud