Review Detail of Schrodinger_s_cat in The Centre World

Item: The Centre World
Rating: 3.8

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I've read till chapter 5 or 6, and I dislike the way it's going. But that's not the problem. The problem is, the writing just feels strange. I'm not a native english speaker so I'm unable to spot the reason, but it disturbs me so much that I'm unable to read it anymore. Still, try it out, everyone has differnet tastes

The Centre World

Zeeksi

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Haha, it's my first novel and the first 10 chapters are rough. I'll get around to rewriting the start and a few others but for now that's cool. Thanks for giving it a chance.

3yr