Review Detail of Inviolable in The Garrison of Warcraft

Meh. I was liking it from the start and even read further in the raws to give it a chance, but I kept being more and more dissapointed. The story just goes from one place to another without reason, his system doesn't really make sense or fit, but that's not the worse part. Time and time again, the MC will just pull the most ridiculous BS out of his arse to rationalize his future knowledge or system. He'll disappear for years when timetravelling into parallel timelines or tell random thugs that Onyxia is the big bad or that the king was split in two. The other characters are all like, "Woah? Really? That's hard to believe, how did you figure that out?" Then the MC will tell them it's a secret, then all is well. This asspull doesn't happen once or twice, but practically every time he travels to a new zone to... Do stuff? As starved as I am for good WoW fics, this one just let me down over and over again. It's unplanned and stale.