Story and character development is going in good direction and hopes if goes on like that. Harem member are also good and hope they get enough screen time unlike other novel where they get separated for 200 to 300 chapters.

Up to chapter 35 review. So first I'm going to give honest props to a self-published work that's pretty decently written especially considering that English may not be this person's primary language. I'll also say that although it seems pretty quick I generally lean towards faster powerups and faster fights. The MC definitely taking the starting strong route and keeps it blazing - and no antagonist really gives him a fight of any consequence so far. Now to the parts I don't like. While I guess I'm ok with the s*xy but not quite ultimate beauty being his first, it really felt like it went super fast. As in underage fast. More problematic is that there were then developments to show this will probably end up as a harem novel as of course his immature eyes start wandering. But then we get to Chapter 35. I don't know why this is a thing in some CN novels but it is very disturbing when now this happens at an underage level. So I'll just say it - r*ape is wrong and even more so against children. You and all the sick f*cks who love this kind of violent behavior can go to hell. I hope you find mental help before you end up in jail living out all your decadent fantasies. As for me, I'm done with this story.

This story is awful. What's worse the tags are wrong. The protagonist is a complete White-Knight (righteous hypocrite) character who 'righteously' expands his harem. How does he do this? Conveniently the MC will meet Heavenly Beauties, and soon after there'll be great opportunity for him to save them. They of course can't help but swoon - if they aren't falling for him fast enough, his cultivation technique will have him lose control, leading to him r@ping them. The victim becomes a tsundere and realises who her true love is - the MC... If this wasn't enough, this novel has the annoying tendency to 'power-up' the entire harem every time the protagonist's power increases. Artefact (necklace) given to harem member 1 turns out to be a godly artefact and she suddenly becomes tyrannically powerful! How a novel could go so wrong is beyond me. This is a shockingly poor novel.

First of all the MC can be ridiculously stupid to the point where you have to wonder how he survived alone in school for so many years while he’s good at cultivation he’s not exactly the best at anything else. This MC is without a doubt scum he raped a girl and later asked if she held a grudge which just shows how dumb he can be. Hell he even thought that they had a “special” relationship after that. The updates are frequent although the writing quality could use a bit of work. So far everything has been really predicable so you will probably see future events coming a mile away. If you are looking for a decent and smart MC than leave this is not for you this MC is a scumbag. As for the world background it’s decent but I wouldn’t say it’s great.

it was great up until a certain chapter where there was a very explicit R-18 r*pe scene... no tags on the book about it. imo the scene wasn't written well at all and completely changes my view of the MC .. kinda disappointing as the start was great.

Very good. Really like the book so far and hope the quality continues throughout. I would recommend this book for people to read and I hope the author doesnt drop it for a long while.

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I can only say that it is at the isekai level of wish satisfaction. At first it seems that the MC is promising but around 40 chp everything starts to lose meaning. Very poorly made harem, similar to a harem isekai. The MC only wins the others because his level of cultivation is above; He does not know sword techniques (etc), nor pills, formation, forging, etc.Summary: Find another

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