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Stormzz
StormzzLv132yr
2022-02-16 08:51

The writing is pretty good, very few errors and a high quality of writing. The pacing is pretty good, each chapter is a little short but it's a fine length. The characters that are introduced feel decently written too.

His Flower: Book 1

NoelleClarke
4.6
40 Chs

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Chloe_Roissere
Chloe_RoissereLv10

Right from the start, this book takes you into its grip. The dedication to describe the world the author is bringing one into is incredible. The color and texture the book gives is in short, amazing. Thank you very much for such a fantastic read. Keep up the great work!

4yr

Boss_FamPot
Boss_FamPotLv2

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Asia_Myth
Asia_MythLv11

Omggggggg......please please please write more. I love this book, im happy its free cuz I dont want to stop reading! I'm so happy he ends up nicer to her at this point at least for now. Most the time vampires stories are being cold and its just so much wanting to hurt the the ones they supposedly care for. This is great I had been hoping to find a vampire story like this, its great so far I love it! Keep up the great work!!!!

4yr
swimmergirl50
swimmergirl50Lv2

So far the book is incredibly interesting and you managed to get me hooked into the book within the first few pages. Really well done, however I have been really disappointed constantly waiting for more to read. I understand that you have other things to be doing, but I would at least prefer to know how long it will be in between chapter releases. It’s impossible to predict when we will get another chapter and I would like it if you had a plan so we could know when another would be out. It doesn’t even have to be many chapters but I would just like to know how long I will have to wait.

4yr
AyPeechella
AyPeechellaLv13

This sorry was really good from the beginning, but the the author just stopped uploading new chapters leaving us in limbo as to where the story was going and what happens...

4yr
Elle_Merveille
Elle_MerveilleLv4

Very interesting and captivating novel to read 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰Please author more update 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏been patiently waiting😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

4yr
Lisa_Lenig
Lisa_LenigLv13

Love it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

4yr
TrishaCK123
TrishaCK123Lv13

this story is really interesting so far...i love the characters and the conflicts created...i just wish it is updated more regularly...keep going Noelle! you are writing a very promising story❤ thank you!🥂

2yr
TrishaCK123
TrishaCK123Lv13

so far so very gooood....please please author...update this work...are you still there??? it's saddening that i can't continue reading when i have already liked it from the start...please hear your readers' request...this book is very promising and we will help you get more attention and increase readership...pretty please with cherry on top???💕💕💕

4yr
Tara_Shoemaker
Tara_ShoemakerLv14

Sadly I love this book but with no updates in over a month I guess I will be removing it from my library. If updates start happening again then I will be happy to come back and support this author

4yr
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