Another god that a -
Mc died because he was jerking and some milk kiled the mc... That - - - -
I don't give this shi.t even a 1 if it was possible...
Read it if you ok with this start of fanf.
what the ****... are you even saying? if you are going to critique a story in english, fucking write out whole ideas, otherwise it looks like you were seizing throughout your entire review