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4shadowsword
4shadowswordLv134yr
2020-09-17 18:44

story development is too boring, at the start when MC started with Omnitrix I thought it was interesting but later it became off the track more chapters MC stuck in that dam forest, later romance not even once it got into small part of main story story started with high expectations but ended up as a trash

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Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14

Was just about to review when i saw yours and thought.... That is exactly the truth right here.. PEOPLE LOOK NO FURTHER FOR THE REAL REVIEW ITS HERE!!

The_Oldest_King
The_Oldest_KingLv3

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ฅ

jhsilver
jhsilverLv12

The author also decides to add another reincarnate which just killed the vibe for me too.

Brandon_Newton_4299
Brandon_Newton_4299Lv2

No itโ€™s good.

The_Berserker
The_BerserkerLv5

it starts slow but good, it just not for horny kids .

yall_shameful_asf
yall_shameful_asfLv1

spoiler: killed off pretty fast.

jhsilver:The author also decides to add another reincarnate which just killed the vibe for me too.
Challenge_Fail
Challenge_FailLv11

yup very boring report copy right strick do everything

DaoistvmZpsL
DaoistvmZpsLLv2

It did get bad somewhat for a while but if you actually continued reading it would get better and at the very least get better plot that actually is kinda good but that's real later

ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

instant drop for me thanks for the warning! ๐Ÿ‘

jhsilver:The author also decides to add another reincarnate which just killed the vibe for me too.
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