Review Detail of amaturewriter in YOU ALL MADE A MISTAKE!(DISCONTINUED)

re -write.....so many worlds mixed in [dxd, the strongest discipline, OPM, foodwars?]...each universe has different lore that you shouldn't mix up, also the MC, kinda pathetic. he was an army dude and yet he didnt train his body, he *****ed about his weak sad life, because he was quirkless, because he got rejected by allmight and various training places because he was scrawny, and he just *****ed about it, kinda pathetic..also what happened?,,,,dude was an army man...wheres his ruthlessness? his experience?..plus he takes **** from bakugo for years and the only thing he does is what? hold his hand?....kinda stupid......MC seems pathetic is what I am saying.....also re-write, it seems interesting but too many different worlds and a ****ty MC. **: give MC better powers....venom and deathstroke are cool but something better like accelerators vector manipulation or some ****