could be a good story. the development of the plot can be interesting in some parts but there are parts that are so cringeworthy that i needed to take a break from reading it, particularly the parts when one gets the impression that conflicts are written into the story just to keep it lengthy. there are chapters that can be skipped and the story won't be affected that much. there are some cringeworthy parts, too like the part where you have the stepsister roving around and saying she is not the fake daughter is just pushing it. yes, you hate her for her schemes, etc. but not to the point that you'd want her insane and wandering about
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