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Review Detail of AmaSu in Mr. Xiao's Unconditional Love

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This started out well, the story is fairly interesting and the translation quality not bad. However, after ch200 the quality started to deteriorate quite a bit. I am not opposed to time skips, especially if appropriate and done well, but more and more time skips were put in rather randomly and continuously jarringly. Quite a few chapters were edited quite poorly. Characters dialogue took strange turns, which may or may not be because of the translation deterioration? Some of the most recent chapters seem to have important plot deleted entirely (chapter 305), either that or chapters are missing. Which wouldn't be surprising since chapters 285, 288, 289, and 292 are repeats of earlier chapters, a fact which has been noted in those chapters' comments... and they still haven't been removed. So save your coins and as of 03-23-2021 don't buy those chapters. I'm just glad I binge read the last 100 or so chapters during a "read for free" day and didn't actually waste any coins/passes on them. If you don't mind using coins/passes on chapters containing the described flaws (or if you catch a free day) then the story can be considered not half bad...but it also can be considered barely half good (hence my score of 3.4 stars).

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Mr. Xiao's Unconditional Love

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