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Cinthya_Lee
Cinthya_LeeLv104yr
2020-05-16 06:28

Please.... YOU MUST CONTINUE your beautiful novel. I wany to give you 2 power stones but it can't be sent. I have read chapter 1 and there is no reason I will not not continue reading your novel. Your good novel was underrated. Please continue. Keep writing, Author...

The Indifferent Young Master’s Flash Marriage

Mu Jiujiu
4.5
1479 Chs

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_eunwa
_eunwaLv4

This is in trial Lmao what're you saying

4yr
8
Bookworm_123
Bookworm_123Lv5

😂😂😂 i also wanna say the same

_eunwa:This is in trial Lmao what're you saying
4yr
1
Gautami_Dubey_2262
Gautami_Dubey_2262Lv2

Yupp

_eunwa:This is in trial Lmao what're you saying
4yr
1
Luna_playz_Gacha
Luna_playz_GachaLv2

Lol

4yr
Nat_Powell
Nat_PowellLv11

Woo

4yr
DNeely
DNeelyLv11

Yes

4yr
1
Just_Oly
Just_OlyLv2

K

4yr
Jessa_Pandili_3558
Jessa_Pandili_3558Lv1

True

4yr
Jessa_Pandili_3558
Jessa_Pandili_3558Lv1

True

4yr
Evadney_Underwood
Evadney_UnderwoodLv11

Love the novel

4yr
1
sandy171982
sandy171982Lv11

Wow

4yr
sandy171982
sandy171982Lv11

Wow

4yr
ezlite05
ezlite05Lv15

Yes continue with exploding chapters

4yr
1
ezlite05
ezlite05Lv15

THese tWo are to funny

4yr
1
Vanessa_Navarrete_9623
Vanessa_Navarrete_9623Lv2

Same

4yr
clw9176
clw9176Lv12

my thoughts exactly

4yr
ShiShi1231
ShiShi1231Lv2

Jj

4yr
DaoistURtHh0
DaoistURtHh0Lv4

4yr
Ms_Attitude_19
Ms_Attitude_19Lv12

true

4yr
Aan_Aan77
Aan_Aan77Lv4

the idea of the story is good however what I think shows immaturity and make the novel to be boring is the way the female character is. the fantasy of describing her as a virgin Mary, scared of having intercorse and fridge is too boring. having a fiancé and had never even kissed!! unrealistic. not wonted to have *** with her husband and discibing it as a 'marital imposed situation' and not as normal act between too people together . I guess the author is very inexperiente and immature as the author cannot even describe the intimacy moments they have to help to spicy up the story and show the growing intimacy and love between them. instead the author insist in showing the character as a fridge woman. unfortunately her husband is sexual driven, handsome and no marriage will survive for long if the other part is fridge. I guess the author doesn't have the life experience and think that two people will still be together because they are wearing couples clothes, a pair of cups with little fishes on it. indeed very childish.

3yr
1
Other Reviews
Red_Tulips
Red_TulipsLv3

At last no drunken/drugged s*x on the the first chapter.✌😁 I'm fond of this story. The FC is a bit frustrating at first but after reading the first 60 chapters I got over it. Hope this story will be continued. I am excited to read for more.❤

4yr

WanekS
WanekSLv4

It is such a nice story and i wish it will be pick for translation...i love how the pace of this story not boring and not dragging..its very spontaneous if i may say.. no drawing back of storyline..i highly recommend it!!!!!!

4yr
Clara_the_fish
Clara_the_fishLv10

Typical stuff. Fiancé stolen by cousin/sister, arrogant and domineering ML, kind of ditzy FL. Nothing new. Thankfully no one’s been drugged yet. Lots of plot holes and loose character development. It’s personally not my style, but it’s a tried and true storyline.

4yr
Aingoogle
AingoogleLv10

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Hontoni
HontoniLv15

For these 60 chapters, I finally did not see any force r@pe scene. I was thinking were there any story like Trial Marriage. Finally I found this. Hopefully when this book continues it be 2 MC supporting each others to concur the obstacles!

4yr
AG_Arian
AG_ArianLv4

I am giving one star to make this author ro wake up!! this story became so boring and nonsense. I absolutely agree with many readers who left comments to the author that the female character is dump, stupid and has no spice. the story is a nonsense and definately repetitive. also very infantile, easy to noticeable author is young and have not much experience. the intimacy of the couple is boring, silly and doesn't show any boundary. the author is making the readers to give up on the book

3yr
Groa
GroaLv4

the story started well and in the middle it changed to even more boring and became very repetitive. the main female character is very very boring and the story became a nonsense. really a wast. we left many comments for the author but still no changes. if you don't want to be annoyed by the story development, just don't read it. really a wast of time. I don't like to leave such a negative comments but I have to do it because I just cannot ready it anymore

3yr
_eunwa
_eunwaLv4

I don't have anything else to say. She's stupid, she's supposedly 'Good' in business but she couldn't even think of such simple matter such as asking him for a marriage contract? Even he, himself suggested but she's still here being a damn idiot.

4yr
Aan_Aan77
Aan_Aan77Lv4

I agree with the latest reviews. the book is silly and became a nonsense. the author sounds very unexperienced and it reflects on the intimates partes. the female character is indeed boring, dump and stupid. I would also suggest not to read the book if you don't want to waste time

3yr
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