Review Detail of docmoya in Imperial Commander: His Pretty Wife Is Spoiled Rotten

First, there are several spots its very difficult to tell what the author actually meant because the words just make no sense. Second, the MC is a 16yo girl when the ML (age undetermined, assumed to be early/mid 20s) starts flirting with her, this is a pretty common theme for young ***** novels because the hearts of youthful maidens is who its written for anyway so i guess its forgivable, just a little icky. Third, the author clearly has a serious disconnect from reality and a complete unwillingness to bother looking up the correct information for things like medical procedures (the mc is a doctor so this is going to be pretty important), animal behaviors, physiological reactions... Overall there are several moments where you will literally stop reading and go '....what??' The characters are otherwise likable but backgrounds characters are kinda flimsy