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ElizaA
ElizaALv34yr
2020-07-28 11:30

Read the first 60 chapters. FL is smart but she does 2 things that annoys me, probably because they're too common. 1. she doesn't go for "easy kills" and wants her enemies to "succeed" before crushing them, aka we already know the evil family will be here for awhile. Why not just get rid of them/be firm from the get go? A little too nice, considering how dumb and naive she was in her last life. 2. she's too mean/indifferent to ML, doesn't want to acknowledge his existence. Guess it's going to take while for romance to build. Dropping it for now.

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In regards to the number 2, is not necessarily that she's cold to the ML, but that the translation is very censored, so most of the hugs, flirting, later on kisses, etc, are ommited making the interaction between them really odd. .

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