After reading 72 chapters.....I can only say that this novel is very disappointing.......First of all, the romance sucks, second the way MC gets girls is not satisfying (Actually its bullsh*t), then third Author tried to make the story funny by making his wives 'kind of' yandere which didn't even earn a fart from me, the fourth Author did a complete personality change of everyone (In an annoying way) which made me lose interest in this novel, fifth there are a lot of plot holes and lastly.....MC is a retard. Dear Author, I hope that your next novel will not be disappointing as this one. You have potaintial to write a good one.

Great chapter ,, I'm from u other novel come here to read because I have smell harem here so I come 🤣🤣🤣🤣 ,, btw hope it harem and this great his time in god realm time story 🤣🤣🤣

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atleast have the mc development of love route, let say 2 or 3 girls, in this way, it's not boring to read, and also if possible have the mc more scene in fighting why only yun che is having a fight

Writing quality is good and updates are pretty stable The pacing is fast A power wank fanfic with lots of plot holes and ooc characters It's still a good read at the earlier chapters but goes downhill from chapter three due to the plot holes and ooc's It can be hard to read as the power wanking is not executed properly.

I really how you changed the flow completely, keep up the great work! ********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

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it's cool, there are only a few things wrong, yun che didn't know he had a daughter, he only knew about it after he "dies" after the Gods convention, that was very wrong but okay, the best thing is that xia qingyue does not appear, I hate this woman