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I noticed that structure of sentences was not in good shape. The grammar is lacking. Tbh, I didn't understand the whole point of the story because of the grammar. Or probably my comprehensive is just poor. Either of that, you still have a room for improvement. Best of luck.

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Thanks a lot for reading, and I asure you that I am working on improving the G part, and very grateful for you review and advice😄