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2020-04-01 01:53

The story has an interesting premise and I like how the author takes care to create characters according to the situations. An intellect behaves in a certain manner, a doctor behaves in a certain way, etc. The author has ensured that each character behaves in a certain set way, not breaking out of character even once. Even though I could never relate to the MC, I still enjoyed the storyflow

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