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trueecka
trueeckaLv54yr
2020-04-10 03:40

It is just quite dull easy-mode novel. I laugh at people complaining how Nie Li was pedo, cause he was teasing 12 year old girls. Fun fact is the original MC didn't touch the girls at all. And in a lot of fanfics new MC just ploughs through them. This one as well. Cause all the girls just love mc and he loves/fucks them back. So this story is about close-to-zero effort from MC Red, who will just gather his Pokemon collection. Also additional female collection. He is so alpha that his harem will gift him additional females to abuse to show their devotion and love. Everyone will accept the words from Red as gospel. If he'd ask to rule the city from shadows, I'm sure he would be granted. In short, pretty dull story, author reusing already created elements from tdg, Pokemon, maybe long live summons.

In the world of TDG as a Pokemon Master

Ruxc
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Ruxc
RuxcAuthor

Its my first time writing and dont expect anything pro stuff, and also those who dont like the Mc building the strength of his friends and trusted people and sharing his knowledge, please get lost for i dont know what kind of knowledge that is, a single player? you guys really think the world is easy without help, you never know what team and good friends are worth in the life, so please get lost and dont read my novel if you want that kind of idiot Mc.

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Suriel8224
Suriel8224Lv5

This is so boring and it's annoying that author forcing mc to be a good person by helping everyone in the novel even though mc is just a ***** that likes snatching other people things and he acts like a fvking saint. Disgusting species

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Rain_Miko
Rain_MikoLv14

Sensei authors I'm here give u 5 star 🤣🤣🤣 , because I like this story and harem story 🤣🤣🤣 ,, btw hope it can make mc get all main hottest , beauty and milf to become mc harem 🤣🤣🤣

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LostThe50_50
LostThe50_50Lv6

Waste of time. Don't know how the novel got 4.3 stars when....well at the very first few chapters the author practically just admitted that the story will go practically the same as the original but with a different MC that thinks with his dick and literally just replacing nie lei. I mean seriously? Do you guys read with your d*ck? Also the author is wrong about, people should get lost because of not liking his concept on friends family love and sh*t. Author should've said " People should get lost if they don't like stories that go exactly the same as the original but from a different MC.

4yr
Vistarion
VistarionLv11

Pointless to read. Author skips world building and character building. Its not a novel, its a author wishing to be the MC writing a senseless diary.

4yr
Daoistunderlord
DaoistunderlordLv14

Was excited to see pokemon like side of development but no instead of hunting for beasts the MC hunts for girls and believes hes entitled to everyone just because, no other reason.

4yr
Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4

Sensei authors I'm here give u 5 star 🤣🤣🤣 , because I like this story and harem story 🤣🤣🤣 ,, btw hope it can make mc get all main hottest , beauty and milf to become mc harem 🤣🤣🤣Sensei authors I'm here give u 5 star 🤣🤣🤣 , because I like this story and harem story 🤣🤣🤣 ,, btw hope it can make mc get all main hottest , beauty and milf to become mc harem 🤣🤣🤣

4yr
Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Shadyninja
ShadyninjaLv14

Honestly, I love any genre as long as there are variety in what I read. I'm okay with the mc treating his friends right. I was also fine with the harem and the girls in it. It took me a while to get used to the fact that an old doctor is dissing an old imortal for manipulating others when he is barely doing any better. The thing I didnt like was the lack of character depth in the characters, or at least the girls. I could barely distinguish one from another. There is no real plot to the romance, but more of a summary. I know Im the minority here, but i think you need some fillers to make the characters more alive, especially the mc. Currently, they feel like 2 Dimensional characters, or kids who chase after what is flashy and cool. I can see the effort you put in the words to diss the mc, matching up word combinations and all that, but that is the only thing I give you credit for. There are plenty of fics who treat nie li like a brother who had been alone for centuries. Those are more my type.

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