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Review Detail of Ravindra_Bisht in draft of my work

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Ravindra_Bisht
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It is a good novel.Eveything is allright however the Mc is so trash I mean litrelly. He got a stone to awaken his powers but he was thinking of selling it when his family is so rich. He didnt believe the system even when he found out that it was made by 4 greatest hunters.He is just so trash.He could not defeat his first enemy. Author I would suggest you to change the mc.Overall it is good.

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draft of my work

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