Review Detail of Nefistoteles in Road to the Crown
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the novel is not bad but sincerely it seems to me a copy of King of Mercenaries the story of a transmigrated to sixteenth century europe who uses his modern knowledge to succeed XD and without having to depend on a magical system I do not want to be harsh and I encourage the author to continue writing but it seems to me not very original and his very confusing work often does not explain things, for example, the whole game system that the protagonist has, in addition to not justifying where it comes from, it seems unnecessary to me sorry my bad English
Road to the Crown
MotivatedSloth
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Honestly, first time hearing about the story you mentioned. As for the orignality of the work, it's more in the setting than in the events. Despite thirteen years wars going on right on the other side of the border, I still decided to go with Commonwealth setting, because that's the framework of the story I wanted to say. Additionaly, if you were to follow my other novel, you would learn that with over 500 chapters, the secrets behind the system are only hinted, not given. Some things are known, some things are not and will remain hidden. But most of all, as the system is only an icing on the cake, I'm not going to let readers focus on it, with how unnatural it would be to the flow of the story. Anyway, thanks for review!
MotivatedSloth:Honestly, first time hearing about the story you mentioned. As for the orignality of the work, it's more in the setting than in the events. Despite thirteen years wars going on right on the other side of the border, I still decided to go with Commonwealth setting, because that's the framework of the story I wanted to say. Additionaly, if you were to follow my other novel, you would learn that with over 500 chapters, the secrets behind the system are only hinted, not given. Some things are known, some things are not and will remain hidden. But most of all, as the system is only an icing on the cake, I'm not going to let readers focus on it, with how unnatural it would be to the flow of the story. Anyway, thanks for review!
Alien_Space_Bat:Is there any chapter which actually shows his status information??
Thank f.ucking God for that! I had enough of chapters with half the thing is bloody stats! Like that sh.itty novel reincarnated as a butterfly!
MotivatedSloth:Nope, and there will never be.