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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthor4yrMotivatedSloth

An obligatory, shameless highfive from author to himself! Hello guys, here is some bits about the story in general: This novel treats about a guy from a modern times transported (not this time, truck-kun!) to the past times, only to learn that the game he wanted to play, turned kinda into reality! With system to his side to aid him on his adventures, he will aim - like the title says - for the crown, but not of the state that was bound to soon start falling apart, but a powerfull and modern country that he would create himself! As for more technical side of things, this story will get at least 2 daily chapters, unless something IRL happens. Additionally, I do acknowledge that I'm not fully content with the early chapters as they are too infu-dumpy without a real hook, so as soon as I will find some time to do so, you can expect me to rewrite and improve that part!

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Road to the Crown

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Shallow_vernal
Shallow_vernalLv10Shallow_vernal

Harem?

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

Not this time! I want this to be more serious novel. If you want harem, I at this point with my other novel in the newest chapters

Shallow_vernal:Harem?
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

hello..question: I am interested but some tags kinda put me off from reading, so I am asking.. is the story tragic/angsty or dark [ie: MC is rapist, lover betrayal] is the romance happy and fluff, meaning is it built properly? [ i dont want to read sad ****]

MotivatedSloth:Not this time! I want this to be more serious novel. If you want harem, I at this point with my other novel in the newest chapters
MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

Hello! First, about the tags - I had to put some of them, not because of the events that already happened but about the events that I consider possible. In the case with r18 - I always put it in my novels, to have the freedom to write anything without caring for sensitive part of the audience, that might be shocked that when you cut someone, he actually bleeds. So no, the MC background is not dark, and his most tragic event is not getting laid in highschool/university he attented, but that doesn't make him rapist right away. Just like in real life, if you were given the chance to start anew in the period you love, would you risk everything by raping someone only because you are horny? On the other hand, I can't really say what direction this story will take. I have some general and deep ideas for the first 2 arcs, and they include both gore (real fights where people can die, lose limbs etc) because that was how this period worked, but it will be just because of the plot neccesity, not to let people revel in it. As for romance, right now (this is kinda spoliery a bit so you might want to avoid this part) =---- There was already one misunderstanding that would let mc get laid, but as a normal man, despite having all the cards to do so, he didn't bank on the situation, instead trying to stay true to himself. Overall, I want this story to be as real as possible (for a story with system) with my MC making mistakes, making poor decisions out of his emotionality and sometimes being torn between two possible outcomes. He is not a God in this story, just someone with a slight advantage. So there might and most likely will be some sad points resulting as the effects of his decisions or simply the flow of the events he entered, but I will try to avoid the cliche routes of young masters with slapped face, predictable and common smut etc. I have enough of that in my other novel :D

amaturewriter:hello..question: I am interested but some tags kinda put me off from reading, so I am asking.. is the story tragic/angsty or dark [ie: MC is rapist, lover betrayal] is the romance happy and fluff, meaning is it built properly? [ i dont want to read sad ****]
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

read your book and I enjoyed it...keep MC OP...just build the romance bru, dont make it shallow or ****ty..ie; chick only like MC cause he is OP or looks good, or MC only likes chick cause they look good or is a rapist....build the romance, keep it happy and fluff, if harem keep it small...just no wives/moms/whores for lovers...make MC like aizen, smart and ruthless but not a nut or arrogant....just suggestions.....anyway GL

MotivatedSloth:Hello! First, about the tags - I had to put some of them, not because of the events that already happened but about the events that I consider possible. In the case with r18 - I always put it in my novels, to have the freedom to write anything without caring for sensitive part of the audience, that might be shocked that when you cut someone, he actually bleeds. So no, the MC background is not dark, and his most tragic event is not getting laid in highschool/university he attented, but that doesn't make him rapist right away. Just like in real life, if you were given the chance to start anew in the period you love, would you risk everything by raping someone only because you are horny? On the other hand, I can't really say what direction this story will take. I have some general and deep ideas for the first 2 arcs, and they include both gore (real fights where people can die, lose limbs etc) because that was how this period worked, but it will be just because of the plot neccesity, not to let people revel in it. As for romance, right now (this is kinda spoliery a bit so you might want to avoid this part) =---- There was already one misunderstanding that would let mc get laid, but as a normal man, despite having all the cards to do so, he didn't bank on the situation, instead trying to stay true to himself. Overall, I want this story to be as real as possible (for a story with system) with my MC making mistakes, making poor decisions out of his emotionality and sometimes being torn between two possible outcomes. He is not a God in this story, just someone with a slight advantage. So there might and most likely will be some sad points resulting as the effects of his decisions or simply the flow of the events he entered, but I will try to avoid the cliche routes of young masters with slapped face, predictable and common smut etc. I have enough of that in my other novel :D
Chryiss
ChryissLv5Chryiss

Dude, just want to congratulate you~ Awesome job, you really pulled through!

NovelDreamer
NovelDreamerLv14NovelDreamer

Author, will the hero have to challenge bigger problems?

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

At some point, yes.

NovelDreamer:Author, will the hero have to challenge bigger problems?
MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

AH, God Damnit. Was watching stupid vids on yt and got confused about which novel this review was for xD Serious answer then - Yeah. There are some troubles for him to face soon, I just have some plans and stages to prepare before hand. After all, if there is nothing for him to lose, what's the point of trying hard?

NovelDreamer:Author, will the hero have to challenge bigger problems?
Favour_Ahamefula
Favour_AhamefulaLv3Favour_Ahamefula

Did the same thing to my book, stolkhom syndrome, lol

King_Half_Dead
King_Half_DeadLv5King_Half_Dead

My nigga all that I ask is you be consistent and finish cuz I'm tired of dropped stories and waiting months for 1 ch

htsanders96
htsanders96Lv14htsanders96

Whoop whoop whoop whoop

synncrytech3
synncrytech3Lv4synncrytech3

Just a question about the tags, since i didn't see kingdom building in there, will he at some point command an army or control the kingdom/parts of it? Its just that those are my main selling points when looking at novels like these. I like the MC to be in a leadership role and stuff, not just go on some fantastical adventure where he needs to perform 'quests' to earn merit. I'm assuming that he does take leadership because if this is medieval times or any period in history , power is earned through mostly military strength to cement your claims, or Political might(Having many people back you, or powerful people). So , is there going to be proper kingdom-building or army-building? or is it all just going to be generic politics? Until you answer I'm going to be checking out the novel to make my own deductions. Really I just want a novel where the MC has military power if you get what I mean, Like a noble commanding an army of Knights you know?

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

Added kingdom building tag. I honestly forgot about it.

synncrytech3:Just a question about the tags, since i didn't see kingdom building in there, will he at some point command an army or control the kingdom/parts of it? Its just that those are my main selling points when looking at novels like these. I like the MC to be in a leadership role and stuff, not just go on some fantastical adventure where he needs to perform 'quests' to earn merit. I'm assuming that he does take leadership because if this is medieval times or any period in history , power is earned through mostly military strength to cement your claims, or Political might(Having many people back you, or powerful people). So , is there going to be proper kingdom-building or army-building? or is it all just going to be generic politics? Until you answer I'm going to be checking out the novel to make my own deductions. Really I just want a novel where the MC has military power if you get what I mean, Like a noble commanding an army of Knights you know?
Huskeylord
HuskeylordLv14Huskeylord

Quick question. If you get the option to go premium will you do so. I'm asking because your story looks awesome but I honestly won't be able to afford to read it if you go premium with your amazing release rate.

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

Yes, I already announced when exactly I will be going premium (21st of this month most likely) and I will be retrolocking the chapters, so you might want to save your fast passes for that day, to be able to read the mass release that will follow the transition and then keep up with the daily upload. (as you can get up to 3 fp/day)

Huskeylord:Quick question. If you get the option to go premium will you do so. I'm asking because your story looks awesome but I honestly won't be able to afford to read it if you go premium with your amazing release rate.
Blackleaf97
Blackleaf97Lv4Blackleaf97

This have magic and stuff? Or just swords and bow?

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

There ain't any magic in human history, so there won't be any in this novel. It's purely historical with some system spicing on top. (Deleted the repeated comment to clean things up)

Blackleaf97:This have magic and stuff? Or just swords and bow?
Gank_Istani
Gank_IstaniLv13Gank_Istani

Mr sloth, I believe should you ever need any motivation for completing this novel, you can msg me and I will be like Mr Gashtashterai in Simon Peggs movie "run fat boy run", get a moped and drive to Poland with a spatula.... Seriously Impressed. Review left. Buying coins to unlock as you update!

Gank_Istani
Gank_IstaniLv13Gank_Istani

Mr sloth, I believe should you ever need any motivation for completing this novel, you can msg me and I will be like Mr Gashtashterai in Simon Peggs movie "run fat boy run", get a moped and drive to Poland with a spatula.... Seriously Impressed. Review left. Buying coins to unlock as you update!