Review Detail of Zelkolak in The Tylingariea Epic

Ok. I read so that I could have an idea about the story. Although there's still plenty to read and I enjoy your story, I want to finish with the review. The story is great, the characters are great and their names, even though for me they are unusual, are powerful and unique. The only thing i could complain about are some typos and the fact that there are paragraphs that cut words in half. But these things, with a bit of editing can be solved. Great story author