Well it seems that this story hasn't gotten that much attention as of yet sadly. It's a entertaining read it has its problems of course but its still fun, the grammar is a bit off due to it not being the writter's main language its perfectly readable, just a few errors here and there that will probably get better overtime hopefully. As of right now they visited the Harry Potter verse, so far so good and a bonus to that is that he's not really sucking on Harry's c0ck, though he does get a lil involved its not that deep, at least to me it's not. The pacing is alright, though i did wanted to go a little faster when he was in his infancy due to me not finding any appeal in child protrags. The chapters are very long for one and thats a nice welcoming change here on the site since most of them range from 1k words to maybe 3k.
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