If u like a transmigration novel for a light and fun read, I will definitely recommend it for you. For the Author. You need to work hard and improve that's how it's. First of all if you are writing in third person. It will be better to use past tenses. And regarding the concept. It's preety good. You have an idea. Now it depends on you, how you can develop it. As a fellow author, I only wish u best of luck
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