Review Detail of Jin_Daoran in Isekai For My Ex

Good enough grammar. But please give some effort to making sure the paragraphs and conversations are formatted to be readable too. The novel description said the MC was a normal human with no power and got by with wits and determination. I was hopeful that this MC would not be another overpowered idiot. But then the MC was announced as the fiance of a queen in the third chapter which... is something else, haha... And then he defeats half a dozen knights effortlessly with a dual-wielding style he has never used before, analyzed the difference between wood and aluminum with a single glance from the bleachers of the fighting arena, and then later plans and executes a rescue operation without prior experrience, based apparently just on knowledge gleaned from TV and family stories, then goes on to defeat...well, you get the idea. Author...*cries*...your definition of 'powerless' is apparently very different from mine. I'm partial to isekai where the MC's power is just modern knowledge, but give some logical reason how the MC got that knowledge please. If any person can plan a hostage retrieval just from watching TV and listening to grandpa talk about the war years, then this reviewer hopes to learn the violin from watching lindsey sterling on youtube. The plot progression of this novel is great. There is always something to be interested in as the MC introduces the wonders of bombs to a medieval world based on magic. The growing relationships of the MC have some interest as well, though I think giving the MC actual friends rather than people he steamrolls over at the soonest opportunity would heighten interest in the world. The beginning chapters are a bit rough but the format and grammar gets better as the story progresses. Lots of action, good development. All in all, a good read. Good going author!