Review Detail of MatchaMilk in Isekai For My Ex

I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail. Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters. I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building. The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand. Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional. I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine. I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem! I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!